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Posted by on Monday, February 23, 2009 at 8:34pm.

Is the grammar in this sentence correct?

The best way to increase sales and satisfy customers complaints, the menu should be updated with new food items and more choices.

  • english - , Monday, February 23, 2009 at 8:37pm

    You should change it to this: The menu should be updated with new food items and more choices, since that is the best way to increase sales and satisfy customer complaints.

  • english - , Tuesday, February 24, 2009 at 10:27am

    Here is another alternative.

    For the best way to increase sales and satisfy customers complaints, the menu should be updated with new food items and more choices.

    I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.

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