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My First Deer Hunt.
On November 17, 2004 the sun silently started slipping beneath the horizon and soon darkness will be creeping in. I knew my first day of deer hunting was coming to an end. I had spent most of the day in a tree stand hopping to see a deer. I sat quietly as time went on. I figured, I was not going to see anything and decided to leave the tree stand to look for a more promising place to hunt tomorrow. I knew dusk was coming soon and had to move along quickly, looking at every possible spot. I heard a branch crack and leaves move. I turned around and a ten point buck was standing about fifty feet away, staring in my direction. I started to shake uncontrollable. It was a pure adrenaline rush. I pulled my gun up in position, putting him in the cross hairs of my scope. I took and deep breathe and slowly squeezed the trigger. I saw the buck run, but was unsure if I had shot him or not. I waited for my husband to show up to help me look for the buck. It was a good shot. The buck only ran about fifty yards or so. I was so excited about my first deer, on my first hunt. Some hunters only dream of having that kind of luck. I now have a ten point buck mounted on my wall to remind me that it was not a dream and how exciting my first hunt was.

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