Posted by Michele on Sunday, February 15, 2009 at 4:47pm.
War: A Social Disease
He wants us to come up with something creative without really using the topic so much. That's the hard part
No Vaccine for War
Would A Vaccine for War be a better title because in the essay we had to find the root problem of war as as a social disease and then find a solution on how to fix the problem?
Yes, if you really emphasize how fear can be eliminated.
No the only time I emphasize fear throughout my paper is in my second paragraph when I state that it's my root principle of war and give reasons why
OK.
Have you emphasized how non-conformity is a "vaccine" against war as a social disease?
No not yet. That paragraph is war as a social disease versus non-conformity. Then through the process of elimination I eliminate everything that does not change my original conflict. Until I find the viable problem to the original conflict. The viable problem that I have is social norms. Then I have to give a detailed solution
I suggest you wait, if possible, for a title for your paper. You may want to tie the title in with your thesis sentence.
My thesis is War as a social disese is influenced by many factors but the primary cause is fear.
Fear Causes War
The Causes of War
I suggest you wait and let possible titles jell a bit before you decide.
Okay Thank You
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