Homework Help: sra jmcguin

Posted by sam help please on Wednesday, January 28, 2009 at 10:34pm.

I'm supposed to do a draft essay on helping a high school senior with improving his grades.

3 recommendation as his friend and there explanations, along with introduction and conclusion sentences. Only one paragraph. ths is the draft any suggestions are appreciated -

also thanks for your help my grades all 3 honors classes all a's one b plus a 3.76 freshman year first semester

Santiago esta sacando notas malas. Insisto en que tu limite tiempo con su novia. Yo recomiendo que tu decedir ortra tocar guitarra o jugar para el equipo de futbol del colegio. Yo sugerir que estudie con su novia.

sra jmcguin - SraJMcGin, Thursday, January 29, 2009 at 10:43am
Because you are writing either TO Santiago or ABOUT him you need to decide which and be consistent. The majority of what you have written looks like you are writing specifically to him, so I'll grade it that way:

Santiago, ya veo que estás sacando malas notas. Por eso, y porque quiero ayudarte, tengo unas recommendaciones. Insisto en que tú limites tiempo con tu novia. Yo recomiendo que tú decidas o tocar la guitarra o jugar para el equipo de fútbol del colegio. También sugiero que estudies con tu novia sies posible concentrar en los estudios.

Sra

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