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July 23, 2014

Homework Help: English

Posted by Larry on Friday, January 23, 2009 at 12:29pm.

"So you're quite shook up about this then?" asked the detective.

"And what did you think of that?" inquired the detective.

"Where were you when they died?" questioned the detective.


Okay, I need help with the dialogue.
Is it correct the way it is thanks.
If not, how would I change it.

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