Posted by Marleen on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 at 11:04pm.
The ideas are fine, although you could polish the language. How long is this supposed to be? If it's a standard essay, 5 paragraphs is what you should aim for. The first will mention what you are writing about, then 3 "proofs" and the last paragraph sums it up.
You might want to do a bit more research on abortion:
http://www.google.com/search?q=abortion&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&aq=t&rls=org.mozilla:en-US:official&client=firefox-a
Sra
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