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I wrote this poem is this a good title?

Tribute to a Soldier
Our eyes see a Soldier
Who's sad, and brave
Who has done what he could do
For us today
Our eyes see him glaring
But he hates to look back
He misses his family
That is all he has left
Our eyes see a man
Who can't go on
He tries his best
But he's not that strong
His eyes tell a story
Of his pride and glory
And now he's in a place he calls home

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    i love it so much!! aww its so sad :(

  • Poem - ,

    Another sensitive poem! You do have a knack. The only question I might have is did you mean to capitalize "Soldier?" It's like a generic "name" so that might be why.

    Sra

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