Homework Help: french from Anonymous to SraJMcGin

Posted by Anonymous on Saturday, January 10, 2009 at 3:39pm.

hi thanks again, u have been very helpfull

besides writing a summary i also have to write a critique
below is what i have writtrn so far , could u please read it ;)

Critique d’En mer

Je pense qu’En mer, le conte écrit par Guy de Maupassant, est une histoire très créative et intéressant. J’aime beaucoup de choses dans cette histoire. Par exemple, je trouve l’intrigue très captivante et J’aime qu’elle soit une histoire différente a tous les contes que j’avais lus. Il y a seulement une chose que je n’aime pas, laquelle est que je pense que le conte est très triste et effroyable.

Comme je n’avais jamais lu un conte qui raconte les drames des flots, je trouve ce conte rafraîchissant et car cette raison je l’aime. De plus, je l’aime aussi car cette histoire contient une intrigue très fascinante. Elle contient aussi beaucoup des surprises, comme quand Javel cadet coupe son bras, et quand il mis son bras dans un baril de pêche et plus tard l’a enterré. Ceux-ci sont une des choses qui cause que j’aime le conte.

Thankyou very much

french from Anonymous to SraJMcGin - SraJMcGin, Saturday, January 10, 2009 at 7:15pm
Since I did read the one you asked to be read first, I don't know if these things were in that one or not.

et J’aime qu’elle = not capitalized "j'aime"

aussi beaucoup des surprises, = beaucoup de

quand il mis son bras = il met

l’a enterré. = Since the first two verbs are in the historical present, this one should be too = l'enterre

Any other thing I remember doing.

Sra (aka Mme)

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