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Homework Help: English

Posted by Karina on Tuesday, January 6, 2009 at 10:49pm.

I need to combine each of the folowing sentences and improve them( clarity and interest). English is not my first language,i am having harder times understanding this.

1. Every so often, a large group of wales or dolphins will throw itself upon shore. The whales strand themselves for no apparent reason.

2. Pilot whales are one species of marine mammal that frequently strand as a group. White-sided dolphins and false killer whales are two others.

3. All three species travel in groups. They are highly social.

4. Humans sometimes manage to discourage whales from running around. Then the animals simply try again later.

5. Individual mammals who beach themselves are often sick. Groups that run around are usually healthy.

6. Stranding almost invariably ends in daeth for these mammals. Why do they do it?

Thanks for help!

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