Homework Help: sra JMcGuin spanish

Posted by sam on Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 8:26pm.

We are suppose to start our paragraph with the first sentence she provided in Spanish. Pleae make any suggestions also on the English grammar. This is my first draft and has taken me a very long time to do.
a big thank you.

El evento más importante para mí del año pasado fue cuando entregué mi proyecto de historía. When I was in eighth grade history in Ms. Harvey’s class, I had spent three months working on my report. The day the report was due; I was nervous as I had to do a presentation. I received an A for my work. This showed me that I was capable of getting a good grade on a challenging project. In addition, another important event is how badly the U.S. economy is doing.

El evento más importante para mí del año pasado fue cuando entregué mi proyecto de historía. Cuando Yo iba en grado oche la clase de historía con Señorita Harvey. Yo trabaje tres meses en un informe. El dia un informe se debió; yo nervioso y alegria de mi trabajo. Que me enseñó ese yo era capaz a de conseguir un buen grado en un proyecto difícil. También, ortra evento importante es que la economía en el estados unidos era muy mal.

sra JMcGuin spanish - SraJMcGin, Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 8:40pm
Terrific start! Only capitalize "Yo" when it begins a sentence = Cuando yo estaba en el grado ocho de la clase de historia, etc. (yo iba means I was going but yo estaba means I was in) For politeness sake, "con la Señorita Harvey." Yo trabajé (accent)tres meses en mi informe. (Your English said "my" but your Spanish said "the.") El día cuando se debió el informe (word order), yo estaba nervioso y alegre (adjective not noun) de mi trabajo. Eso me enseñó que yo era capaz de conseguir un buen grado, etc. Check spelling here = otro evento...la economía en Los Estados Unidos es muy mala.

Always check necessary accents, whether you want ir or estar or ser, whether you want an adjective (alegre) or a noun (alegría,) capitalization = all part of proofreading!

Sra

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