I changed soem of the english to have it sound better can you help me with the spanish changes - thank you
En las vacaciones de invierno me quedé en casa. Pasé tiempo con mi familia. Yo estudié para los exámenes finales. Yo tuve tiempo para organizar mis cosas. Yo celebré Chanukah con mi madre y la Navidad con mi padre. En Chanukah encendimos unas velas y recibimos unos regalos. Nosotros celebramos por ocho días. La Navidad nosotros decoramos un árbol y celebramos por un día. Yo recibí una cartera amarilla y perfume. Me divertí porque me relajé.
During the winter break I stayed at home. I spent time with my family. I studied for my final exams and worked on my extra credit. I had time to organize my room and clothes. I celebrated Chanukah with my mom and Christmas with my dad. We celebrate Chanukah for eight days and light the candles each night. For Christmas we decorate a tree and celebrate for one day. I received a yellow wallet and perfume and an alarm clock for my IPOD. My mom and I had fun together shopping. I also spent time with my friends.
I noticed 3 things in the English that you did not write in Spanish:
worked on my extra credit. = y trabajé en mi crédito-extra.
My mom and I had fun together shopping. = Mi mamá y yo nos divertimos al ir de compras.
I also spent time with my friends. = Pasé tiempo también con mis amigos.
Felices Pascuas y Un Próspero Año Nuevo.
Sra