For example, a female may make her eyes appear rounder by completely outlining her eye to both corners, more oval by lining the top lid thicker in the middle, or larger by finely lining the bases of both the upper and lower lashes.
I want to put "than before" in there somewhere to get rid of the incomplete comparison, but I don't know where to put it so that it will make sense.
Sentence Editing - Writeacher, Sunday, December 7, 2008 at 9:09pm
"than before" what??