this is the way i am starting my intro. What else can I add to it.
Best Practices Manual for Supervisors
This manual will have everything you will need to help tell someone about the different responsibilities a supervisor has in his or her job description.
MGT HELP ASAP - Ms. Sue, Saturday, December 6, 2008 at 5:04pm
Is that it? Or did your introduction not post?
Remember, introductions need to "grab" the audience, briefly explain what the work is about, and finish with a thesis statement.
MGT HELP ASAP - troyer0269, Saturday, December 6, 2008 at 5:06pm
it didn't post the 1st time but i got it to post i think now
MGT HELP ASAP - Ms. Sue, Saturday, December 6, 2008 at 5:10pm
I'm sorry, but I accidentally deleted the sentence that you posted.
You'll need to list the major items that you're covering in the manual. Please add to that sentence so that your introduction is at least 4 sentences long. Then post it, and we'll be glad to critique it.
MGT HELP ASAP - Anonymous, Friday, December 12, 2008 at 9:09pm
The supervisor’s primary objective should be to avoid making mistakes in employment decisions that can lead to EEO [Equal Employment Opportunity] complaints why