My eyes do not scan up and down easily, so I'm printing this out and will be back as soon as I've read it.
Sra (aka Mme)
It's strange to begin with "Mes vacances sont passées" because the Imperfect is much better = Mes vacances étaient assez ("plutôt" I like better) ennuyeuses; alors (to avoid run-on sentence)
des nouvelles = before preceding plural adjective, it's best to say "de nouvelles..."
Because you began in the Past Tense, "nous allions faire..."
masc. plural = grands-parents
J'avais cru que on = must be ...qu'on
To know why your accents stopped, I'd have to know if you have a MAC or PC, Windows or not. Then I'm sure you'd know it's "être
une malle is a chest or trunk for clothes = why not say "dans la voiture?"
"On a eu?" = Why not "Il y avait...?"
aprés....hôtel....un lit (it's masc.)...garçons....fôret...près...hôtel...allés...There is "malle" again = la voiture
après....not minuits (midnight) but minutes... retournés....frère...offert de chercher.....à la chasse
connaître is to know, be acquainted with people, so here you need "a su" (savoir)....déjà...mangé
Sra (aka Mme)
I had the duck story too :) We do these weekly but I like to get them checked when I do them in a hurry because I make twice as many mistakes! Merci Mme
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