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Posted by Amy on Monday, December 1, 2008 at 5:50pm.

ok please tell me what you think of this and tell me what i could fix of it and how should i write the conclusion

Many proud moments can happen in people lifes. Some of them mean more to them than others. Others are just might not be as interesting. One of my most proudest moments was when i made a desicion to change. I have always been know as the nice, shy girl. I like the nice part but I was ready for the shy girl part to change. I became ready to break out of my shell.

What caused me to make a change? When all you think about is what people think, am i doing the right thing. You would probably would be tired of it too. I never said anything and just sat there. In class I knew that answer but I wouldn't say anything afraid being afraid if it was the wrong answer. I kept on telling myself who cares what they think. If they like you they like you. Then one day I went to a company picnic at my dads job. I met a girl that I hadn't seen for awhile I was relaxed and just acted like myself. I was laughing and having fun and didn't care what people thought. I loved it! That was the way I wanted it to be.

Who helped me change? A good friend to do it with is always a good way. My friend _______ was also like me. She always worried about what people thought of her and was very self conscious. While talking on line one day, we tolled each other how we felt about things. We both had the same feelings about how we wanted to be more outgoing and we were tired of caring what people thought. So we decided to make a plan, the plan really helped and really worked.

What is it like after the change? It was more than a change it was part of me growing up. The first day back to school some of my other friends had noticed. My parents were proud of me and say that I act better and like I did when I was younger. I have more confidence and its easier to talk to people. I have more energy and I enjoy sociolizing. I can talk and say what I want to say with out feeling stupid. I feel happy and I have a lot more fun.

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