parents should organize children to learn through activities,whatchin television,and expressing their feelings with their parents,
please help me to mak it a better thesis sentence.
writing - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, November 19, 2008 at 6:02pm
I have no idea what you're trying to prove. If you list an outline of what you intend to say in your paper, we'll have a better chance of helping you formulate your thesis sentence.