can someone help me edit this?

Pour sa nouvelle chambre, il (elle?) veut changer les meubles et la couleur des murs. Aussi, il (elle?) veut organiser sa grande collection de livres des animaux

ty

Well, without the English to tell me what you meant to say, how can I tell if it is he = il or she = elle?

You will need to decide that = he or she. The rest looks fine.

Sra (aka Mme)

im trying to say I, and im a boy? so its il?

Yes, indeed But, why are you talking about yourself in the 3rd person? Actually shouldn't you be saying:

Pour ma nouvelle chambre, je veux changer les meubles et la couleur des murs. Aussi, je veux organiser ma grande collection de livres des animaux.

Sra (aka Mme)

Of course! I can help you with editing. The sentence you provided is in French, so let's make a few corrections to improve it:

"Pour sa nouvelle chambre, il/elle veut changer les meubles et la couleur des murs. De plus, il/elle souhaite organiser sa grande collection de livres sur les animaux."

In this edited version, I made the following changes:

1. "il (elle?)" changed to "il/elle" - This accounts for both masculine and feminine subjects. Choose either il (he) or elle (she) based on the gender of the person you're referring to.

2. "Aussi" changed to "De plus" - "De plus" means "furthermore" or "in addition," and is a more appropriate transition in this context.

3. "livres des animaux" changed to "livres sur les animaux" - The correct phrase is "livres sur les animaux," which means "books about animals."

Please let me know if you have any further questions or need additional help!