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Posted by on Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:03pm.

Rewrite this paragraph so that it is set in the future.
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The applications for this technology are far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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Help please, I know how to do past and present, but I'm having trouble with future.

thanks,

  • English - , Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:09pm

    I'll get you started --

    The applications for this technology will be far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.

    How would you change the other verbs?

  • English - , Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:11pm

    The applications for this technology will be far-reaching.
    The special system will allow companies to track shipments.
    It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.

  • English - , Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:23pm

    It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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    It doesn't like it makes sense, wouldn't,

    "It will also help keep....."

    Make more sense? Would that work tho?

  • English - , Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:25pm

    Yes, Larry, both make sense. The adverb, "also" can be used more than one place in a sentence.

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