Posted by Larry on Monday, November 17, 2008 at 10:03pm.
I'll get you started --
The applications for this technology will be far-reaching. The special system allows companies to track shipments. It also helps keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
How would you change the other verbs?
The applications for this technology will be far-reaching.
The special system will allow companies to track shipments.
It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
It also will help keep people safe in countries with high rates of kidnapping.
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It doesn't like it makes sense, wouldn't,
"It will also help keep....."
Make more sense? Would that work tho?
Yes, Larry, both make sense. The adverb, "also" can be used more than one place in a sentence.
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