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Can someone proofread this please? I'm terrible at proofreading french -_-

Pretty much it's like this i need to get 5 interesting places or facts and write 5 sentences about them. Right now i only have 2 sentences and will post more later so here it is


Visiter au Québec et Voir Montréal, la plus grand city au Québec. C'est le dixieme nettoyons city dans le monde. le city-soeur de Montréal est Hiroshima, Japan. Montréal est la siège du "Just for Laughs". Découvrez ca le Montréal est en fait une île.




La Ville de Québec ou 95% du les peuples parlent le francais comme leur langue maternelle. C'est la siège à le carnival d'hiver. C'est aussi le suelment city fortifié nord du le mexique. La ville de Québec est la siège à beaucoup des musée d'art, des églises, et culturel richesses

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    Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Always try to write using the structures and vocabulary you have used. Sometimes, if you do NOT provide the English of what you are attempting to say, we can't guess!

    Having lived in Montréal, I'm so glad you are writing about that wonderful city!

    The first sentence is not a complete sentence since you begin with infinitives (to visit Quebec, etc.) "city" is "la ville" = la ville la plus grande.....

    Is sentence #2 saying "It's the 10th cleanest city in the world? C'est la dixième ville la plus propre du monde.

    If you are using English, use quotes "Sister City"...

    Do you mean the "headquarters" for Just For Laughs? In French, that series is called "Juste Pour Rire."

    I'm not sure what you wish to say for the next sentence = Découvrez que Montréal est une île en fait.

    Let me come back for the 2nd part, as my eyes get weary scrolling up and down!

    Sra (aka Mme)

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    Partie II:

    The first sentence means "where?" = où. There IS a difference between "peuples" and "gens" so here "les gens" would be better. Don't forget all accents = le français. C'est le site (site?) du Carnival d'hiver.

    Word order in the 3rd sentence = C'est aussi la seule ville fortifiée au nord du Mexique.

    For variety's sake, you might want to change the last sentence a bit. = Dans la ville de Québec vous pouvez trouver beaucoup de musées d'art, des églises, et des richesses culturelles.

    Sra (aka Mme)

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    thanks and sorry for not saying things in english :( this is my first time using it i'll make sure to type what i'm trying to say in english next time

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    ugh, all the accents are screwed up...

    here's the fixed version
    i hope it works >.<




    Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. Always try to write using the structures and vocabulary you have used. Sometimes, if you do NOT provide the English of what you are attempting to say, we can't guess!

    Having lived in Montréal, I'm so glad you are writing about that wonderful city!

    The first sentence is not a complete sentence since you begin with infinitives (to visit Quebec, etc.) "city" is "la ville" = la ville la plus grande.....

    Is sentence #2 saying "It's the 10th cleanest city in the world? C'est la dixième ville la plus propre du monde.

    If you are using English, use quotes "Sister City"...

    Do you mean the "headquarters" for Just For Laughs? In French, that series is called "Juste Pour Rire."

    I'm not sure what you wish to say for the next sentence = Découvrez que Montréal est une île en fait.

    Let me come back for the 2nd part, as my eyes get weary scrolling up and down!

    The first sentence means "where?" = où. There IS a difference between "peuples" and "gens" so here "les gens" would be better. Don't forget all accents = le français. C'est le site (site?) du Carnival d'hiver.

    Word order in the 3rd sentence = C'est aussi la seule ville fortifié au nord du Mexique.

    For variety's sake, you might want to change the last sentence a bit. = Dans la ville de Québec vous pouvez trouver beaucoup de musées d'art, des églises, et des richesses culturelles.

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