posted by mysterychicken on .
I mentioned earlier that I was doing an essay on the Taj Mahal. Here is my draft for it and I'd like you to revise it;any tips are highly appreciated. I used the first site i found on google when I typed in Taj Mahal essay help (since i cant give a link) Thanks-MC
The Taj Mahal, a beautiful monument made of white marble by the Mughals, is considered one of the eight wonders of the world.
It was made by Muslim emperor Shah Jahan for his dear wife in 1631. The total amount of workers it took to make this beautiful peice was 20,000 and the cost was 32 million rupees!
The Taj Mahal is located in Agra, India and attracts millions of visitors per year! Being a very popular tourist attraction, it is quite a sight. There are tours given to see the whole place inside which includes also seeing the tombs of the two lovers, Shah Jahan and Mumtaz Mughal.
Building the Taj Mahal took great effort and quite a lot of money but almost everyone agrees, it's a place worth seeing.
This is a major grade for me so please help. I'm really not sure about it at all. The point is just to give basic information (im only in 8th grade)
THanks again -MC
can someone plz revise this for me? i need it tommorow thanks -MC