Posted by Toni on Monday, October 27, 2008 at 1:05am.
I would parallel it on the word needs.
xxxxxx needs yyyyy and yyyyy, and xxxxxx needs zzzzz to pay for yyyyy and yyyyy.
Bobpursley is right. Here's an option:
Every town and city needs more parking space, more places where people can relax, and more revenue to pay for these things.
Now it's parallel; there are three direct objects after the verb: more parking space, more places..., and more revenue...
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
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