Posted by dana on .
Which change, if any, should be made to this sentence?
"Though more snow is expected, she can make it through, and she'll deliver the supplies."
Delete both commas,change commas to semicolons, or make no change.
Saturday, October 18, 2008 at 5:20pm
There is no change needed. However, the sentence would flow better if you deleted the ",and she'll".