Homework Help: Thesis statement help

Posted by Amanda on Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 12:21am.

I need help writing a thesis. Here are my topic sentences.

Question: Analyze the concerns and goals of participants in teh Pilgrimage of Grace and of those who opposed the movement.

1. Participants in the Pilgrimage of Grace consisted of common people and men of status who shared concerns and goals involving corruption in government, the Scots, and religious liberties.

2. The main concern of the opposition was the direct impact the Pilgrimage of Grace would have on public order.

3. Social concerns existed in both parties, including the closing of monasteries, as well as a converging opinion on teh ignorance of the people and how it would affect unity within England.

Thesis statement help - Toy, Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 12:51am
The concerns and goals of participants in the Pilgrimage of Grace and of those who opposed the movement varied in several distinctive ways.
Thesis statement help - Writeacher, Thursday, October 16, 2008 at 7:49am
Toy's suggestion for a thesis statement is a good start, but is not a real thesis statement yet. It includes factual information, but it needs your OPINION, your POSITION, your STANCE -- it needs to include your ATTITUDE about this topic.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
Read through the examples here to learn how to turn a non-thesis statement into a good thesis statement. You should look especially at the first, second, and fifth examples.

Let us know what you come up with.
AP European History - chris, Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 7:47pm
Analyze the concerns and goals of participants in the pilgrimage of grace and of those who opposed the movement
AP European History - chris, Thursday, January 1, 2009 at 7:48pm
Analyze the concerns and goals of participants in the pilgrimage of grace and of those who opposed the movement
Thesis statement help - Mika, Thursday, October 22, 2009 at 9:19pm
Participants of the Pilgrimage of Grace were concerned primarily with obtaining back certain lost rights while those who opposed their movement wished to maintain order on their own terms.
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