Posted by Hillary on Monday, October 13, 2008 at 2:57pm.
Wow -- your spelling needs some work, too!
The second one is incorrect because it's confusing to read "cheering crowds about his historic flight."
The first one is a bit strange in the sequence of verb tenses -- main verb is in the past, so the others should be, too. Shouldn't it be this?
Standoffish and reserved, Charles was uncomfortable with the applause he received from the crowds which cheered his historic flight.
what did i spell wrong?
grammar
Charles
received
receives
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