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Homework Help: journalis

Posted by Amy on Tuesday, October 7, 2008 at 3:56pm.

ok so i have asked help already on this same article but i need help making this paragraph better and more understanding.

Soccer is a simplier game. The goal of the game is for the players to kick the ball into there teams net and there are more plays involved. In football there are more perplexing plays involved. The football players most catch the ball and get it to the end zone with out getting tackled.

ok should i compare soccer to yet another sport or is that one ok?

does it make you want to read more?

what things could make it better??

does it even make sense

plse help. i am so stressed up this article

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