Homework Help: World History

Posted by Filipe on Sunday, September 21, 2008 at 3:35pm.

Is this a good thesis for this topic question? I really need help, I can't ask my mom for help right now and I usually have her help me so it's kind of hard for me to do this totally on my own thank you so much if anyone could help.

Topic Question:"An unnatural alliance that was bound to fall apart after the defeat of the common enemy." To what extent does this statement explain the origin of the Cold War?

My Thesis:These legacies of distrust throughout the history of the United States and Russia is what caused the Cold War, and after the defeat of the common enemy Hitler, the disagreements between the US and Russia only grew larger, also Stalin’s unilateralism caused the alliance during WWII to fall apart.

World History - Writeacher, Sunday, September 21, 2008 at 4:58pm
The content is fine, but you need to smooth it out and make it not read so "choppily." That last clause needs to be better incorporated so you don't have a run-on.

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