Posted by Gwen on Monday, September 15, 2008 at 11:42am.
First, your thesis must be a sentence. Your "thesis" is not a complete sentence.
Check these sites for details about thesis statements.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
After you've come up with a good thesis statement, then what are you going to say in its defense?
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