Posted by Anna on .
Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph?
In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.
It looks good to me, but I'd change "your" to "the reader's."
Please correct the spelling of "morale" to "moral."
Except for the word "your," it's a good topic sentence.
Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.