Homework Help: English

Posted by Anna on Wednesday, September 10, 2008 at 9:50pm.

Is this a good topic sentence for a paragraph?

In A Raisin in the Sun, Lena Younger is the nurturing, morale character who
keeps the Younger family in line and earns your respect in the story.

English - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, September 10, 2008 at 9:51pm
It looks good to me, but I'd change "your" to "the reader's."
- English - Ms. Sue, Wednesday, September 10, 2008 at 10:17pm
  Please correct the spelling of "morale" to "moral."
English - Writeacher, Wednesday, September 10, 2008 at 9:51pm
Except for the word "your," it's a good topic sentence.

Be sure to omit all forms of "you" in your papers unless you are quoting someone.

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