Posted by Vic on Sunday, September 7, 2008 at 6:42am.
really good but a little creepy. ya might wanna tone it down a little. its really good though
Thank you for using the Jiskha Homework Help Forum. The spelling you used for "liquorice" is a British variation of "licorice." That was interesting.
Main Entry: li·quo·rice
chiefly British variant of licorice
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As for the poem, I think you did an outstanding job!
The Kenning technique- im not sure that i get this:
television: information box
police: law keepers
poptart: breakfast food
music: great noise
computer: touch information
I dont know, any suggestions?
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