Posted by Patricia on Saturday, August 16, 2008 at 5:33pm.
Patricia -- you have some great ideas in your answer. However, it's hard to read because of numerous typos and grammatical mistakes.
Please read your answer slowly out loud to make these corrections.
Examples:
know that is probably was other people Do you mean "was" or "what"?
who had deal with something Don't you want to insert "to" before "deal"?
If you repost your corrected answer, we'll be glad to check it.
In the future, if nobody is available to proofread your work, you can do this yourself. After writing your material, put it aside for a day — at least several hours. (This breaks mental sets you might have that keep you from noticing problems.) Then — as Ms. Sue indicated — read it aloud as if you were reading someone else's work. (Reading aloud slows down your reading, so you are less likely to skip over problems.)
If your reading goes smoothly, that is fine. However, wherever you "stumble" in your reading, other persons are likely to have a problem in reading your material. Those "stumbles" indicate areas that need revising.
Once you have made your revisions, repeat the process above. Good papers often require many drafts.
I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.
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