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Posted by Dylan on Tuesday, July 22, 2008 at 11:02am.

Over the summer I read several different books, but the two that stuck out the most to me was Salt A World History by Mark Kurlansky and SUB 4:00 Alan Webb and the Quest for the Fastest Mile by Chris Lear. When I am asked which author was more successful in creating a good piece of literature I would say Lear was.

The book Salt was structured in the way to inform the reader and not so much to tell a story. Youíll be greeted by a gigantic wall of text as Kurlansky quotes other works on the same subject left and right. I thought at first this would be a good characteristic for this kind of book but it turned out to be an annoyance when Kurlansky started quoting old recipe books that told you how to make sauerkraut or pickles and seemed rather pointless. Kurlansky also throws in words and phrases in different languages and then would tell you more about the origin of those words and there significance. For example on page fifty four it says this,

It is a sad fate for a people to be defined for posterity by their enemies. Even the name, Celt, is not from their own Indo-European language but from Greek. Keltoi, the name given to them by Greek historians, among them Herodotus, means ďone who lives in hiding or undercover.Ē The Romans, finding them less mysterious, called them Galli or Gauls, also coming from a Greek word, used by Egyptians as well, hal, meaning ďsalt.Ē They were the salt people. The name of the town that sits on the East German salt bed, Halle, like the Austrian towns of Hallein, Swabisch Hall, and Hallstatt, has the same root as do both Galicia in northern Spain and Galicia in southern Poland, where the twon of Halych is found. All of these places were named for Celtic saltworks.

The book talks about salting fish every five pages so you can expect to learn a lot about fish. There are many graphics throughout the book like maps which greatly help as the author jumps around from place to place basically every chapter. The book gets extremely hard to read because of these facts and a reader will struggle to finish the huge book. Salt is an interesting subject but the Kurlansky didnít do a great job keeping the reader tuned into the book wanting to finish it.

SUB 4:00 Alan Webb and the Quest for the Fastest Mile, by Chris Lear tells the story of Alan Webbís high school and college running career. The book contains several photographs. If youíre not much of track and field fan or athlete youíll most likely never pick up this book or enjoy it much. You have to be able to relate to Webb and now what itís like to go through injuries, the disappointment of doing terrible in cross country and becoming a star in track, and being coached by coaches whom you dislike. If you were looking for a book that focuses on what an athlete has to go through in high school to run a sub 4:00 youíll be greatly disappointed as the book mostly focuses on Webbís stay at University of Michigan. The author does a great job showing Webbís struggle to make that life changing decision many good athletes will go through, to go pro or finish up school.

SUB 4:00 Alan Webb and the Quest for the Fastest Mile, by Chris Lear is a great book for anyone whoís a mid distance track athlete. Like I said before if your not a track fan then you wonít be able to get into this book. The book does get rather boring after a while but not to the point of dragging it out like Salt. I enjoyed the book more than salt because if you havenít guessed it already Iím a track athlete myself and can easily relate to all the suffering Webb has had to go through. I specialize in the mile and am very good at track but when it comes to cross country Iím right on level with every one else and not insanely far ahead of everyone. So I found it rather interesting to see another athlete just not understand why Iím so good at track but suffer miserably when it come to the longer distances. Thatís not to say that Salt is a bad book. Itís very well put together and I greatly enjoyed it. Salt is the only rock the humans eat and I hope itíll be the last time I have to read it.

If I wasnít a track athlete I would of most likely hated the book because track is a very hard sport to get into if you donít run it yourself. With 8-8-08 youíll see a lot of more of track on TV then you normally would. The next time I count how many grams of salt I took in a day Iíll now itís a huge amount even though Iím not eating the rock plainly or adding it on myself to other foods.

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In a five-paragraph persuasive essay, discuss which author was more successful in creating a good piece of literature. Use example from both books to explain your thinking.

The student demonstrates an uderstanding of both books.

The student demonstrates judgments about the literary quality of each book

The student supports these judgments with examples from both books.

The student prepares an insightful anyalysis of the literary elements in the books.

All of them are out of 25 points

I know my essay is bad but it's a start. I was really stuck on what to write about sense both of these books aren't novels. I can't talk about charecter development or anything. If you can give me some ideas on what I should talk about that I forgot to mention that would be great. Also the formating and the order of the paragraphs. And anything else you think needs to be fized. Don't worry about spelling and stuff of the sort just yet because I'm most likely am not going to have to rewrite the whole thing again but I'm going to have to update it a lot.

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