Writeacher sent me these sites about how to write an essay and develop a thesis statement.
http://esl.about.com/cs/writing/ht/ht_essay.htm (How to write an essay)
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/catalogue.html#org (The best I've found for thesis statements, intros, and conclusions for beginning writers.
thank you I will go to them now.
You're welcome! I'm sure the next essay you post will be very good! :-)
I hope so because it is due sunday. I will post it when I get through with it. Thanks for helping me and beinging there for me and for still wanting to read my essay. Thanks alot Ms. Sue.