Homework Help: English

Posted by Lamp on Tuesday, July 1, 2008 at 11:41pm.

If she does not correct her behavior or we do not hear from her for apology by post to us in 7 days from the date of this letter, we shall report it to police accordingly.

The above is a part of content in warning letter, pls me to check if it is correct in grammar.
Thank you so much.

English - Writeacher, Wednesday, July 2, 2008 at 7:21am
It's a very wordy and awkward sentence. It can be more simply and clearly stated like this:

If she does not correct her behavior or apologize by July 9, 2008, we shall report her behavior to the police.

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