Homework Help: English

Posted by Robin on Tuesday, July 1, 2008 at 7:59pm.

I have to write an essay for class. The topic is: Is too much emphasis placed on grades in our system? Explain.

Is this a strong or weak thesis? Our educational system is to mandated when it comes to grades.

English - Writeacher, Tuesday, July 1, 2008 at 8:55pm
Your sentence doesn't make sense. The word "mandated" is not used correctly (and the word before it should be "too" not "to").

Find another word for "mandated" and repost please.
http://www.thesaurus.com
English - Robin, Tuesday, July 1, 2008 at 10:18pm
Our educational system is too strict when it comes to grades.
English - Ms. Sue, Tuesday, July 1, 2008 at 10:58pm
How about --

Too much importance is attached to grades in our educational system.

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