Posted by Ritsha on Saturday, June 21, 2008 at 6:25pm.
Good start, but not quite a thesis statement.
A thesis statement tells what your paper is about.
Include your reasons that computers are becoming more useful...(usually three reasons which will become your body of your essay)
Example:
Due to advances in technology computers are becoming more useful because they are very reliable, easily store data....
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