February 23, 2017

Homework Help: english

Posted by gee gee on Friday, June 20, 2008 at 12:06am.

my Topic & Thesis Statement is this...

Topic: How Do You Know If Your Nail Salon is Clean and Safe?

Thesis: The best solution as to not getting a toe or nail fungus, is to avoid unclean nail salons.

But my teacher says "how do you persuade people that nail fungus is a real problem?

So my Question is how can i rewrite my Thesis Statement so that it sounds more like it can persuade you.

Thank you.

Answer This Question

First Name:
School Subject:

Related Questions

More Related Questions