February 24, 2017

Homework Help: English Improving writing

Posted by Kaleigh-Anne on Monday, June 9, 2008 at 9:03am.

Ok this what I have now Thanks to all of you for your help

Brain storming revised

The problem is Jack and Rachel often has nothing to do
Bonnie and Molly is working extra and have to work over time
Melanie and Jessica share an administrative assistant
Larry assistant only works 15 hours
The company is not working as well as it can
There is friction between the staff Bonnie and Molly feel that they are not being treat fairly
Jack and Rachel could help out the Bonnie and Molly so they do not have to work over time
Try and split the work more evenly
Maybe get rid of Larry’s assistant who work only 15 hours or see if they can work more hours
The administrative assistant can maybe help Samuel and Frank Daily who has no aslant
Along with helping Melanie and Jessica
I have may years working with the public
been at the company for a long time
the uneven productivity has a bad impact on the company
may lose clients if problem is not fixed soon
giving the company a bad name
morale is getting low
company finances is slowly sinking
this problem has been going on for over a month
Hiring extra help in the long run will improve efficiency
if the employees do not feel stressed they will do better at their job which will increase company morale

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