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In the third sentence, >> . . . Michael's anxiety . . .
You might mention some of the plans that will help him minimize his stress.
One of the theories that I select is the Anxiety (NO CAPS) disorder. It is a serious condition that is caused by extreme and chronic anxiety (COMMA) which interrupts thought, mood, behavior, (DOES IT INTERRUPT THE FOLLOWING?) exaggerated worry, unfounded tension as well as physiological activity. Therefore, Michael (POSSESSIVE) anxiety progresses or will become worse if not treated immediately. Today, according to the National Institute of Mental Health (NIMH), about 19 million adults have anxiety disorders in the United States. (THIS POREVIOUS SENTENCE SHIFTS FROM MICHAEL TO GENERAL DATA. THEN YOU GO BACK TO MICHEAL AGAIN. REPOSITION THIS SENTENCE.)Michael is experiencing chest pains after so many life changes. Therefore, it is urgently recommended that he seeks help from a mental health professional. Michael can also regain control of his health by focusing on a plan that can help him minimize his stress. (THE PROFESSIONAL CAN HELP HIM DO THIS.) Also, talk to people in order to get some positive feedbacks (SINGULAR) that will help him regain his locus of control.(NOT A SENTENCE)
WHICH PEOPLE HE TALKS TO WILL MAKE A BIG DIFFERENCE. BESIDE PROFESSIONALS, THERE MIGHT BE SUPPORT GROUPS, WHERE OTHERS WILL NOT JUDGE HIM. JUST TALKING TO ANY FRIENDS MIGHT GET HIM REJECTED, WHICH WOULD INCREASE HIS ANXIETY.
Here are some aspects related to stress:
I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.
In what stage of development is Michael and what factors about this stage might be impacting his perspective of this situation?
What relationship factors or considerations might be influencing Michael’s problems?
Spydag I need some informations that can help me answer those two questions.