Once again, please write the very best application letter that you can. Base it on the examples in your book and the information you have gotten from class. Then we will, as always, be happy to help you with corrections and suggestions.
Here is a webpage to help you with writing a business letter. Use the links at the left if there's something there that will help you, too.
Human Resources Manager
122 West Third Street
Mayfield NY 12117
Dear Mrs Certner:
I saw you helped wanted ad for Office assiantant for your small independent medical laboratory. I know that I will be a great asset to your company Please consider me for such position.
I graduated from Appleton High School in 1995. I was in the Honors program. After High School I went directly to Penn-State where I majored in Health care. and took several computer coures such as Microsoft Word And Excel.
After receving my degree at Penn-State I took public speaking classes with provied me with strong communication skills. I am currently employed at Smith and Jones Health Care Clinic. My duties include scheduling appointments,m data entry maintaing medical records along with filing paper work. Being that I work in a clinic I often nee to speak with the physicans and other staff members. I belive working a team is very important.
I have been working at the clinic for the past 12 years and I have just learned that after being open for the past 30 years the clinic will be closing it's doors in July. I am sure that because of my experince I will be able to work in a fast pace enviorment I am good a multi tasking.
My current Boss Mr Alan P. Smith has allowed me to use him for a reference.
I look forward to hearing form you to set up an interviwe at your convenience. If you need to get in contact with me please feel free to call me at (518) 555-555
You need to check for all of the following:
*correct choice of words (example: your, not you)
*correct use of capitals and lower-case letters
*correct use of commas
*correct use of end punctuation for sentences
Choose the topics you need from this index:
Then revise and repost.