hi
i had to do a concrete poem about shopping...but i don't know wat to write...
can i get any ideas?
What do you think about shopping? Do you enjoy it? Do you regret spending the money? Does shopping frustrate you?
You could do your poem in the shape of a dollar sign.
i love going shopping...but i don't get how to do thses types of poems for some reason
You only need to write a few words for a concrete poem. Summarize your feelings about shopping in a dozen or so words. Then write them in a shape -- for instance a dollar sign. You might use the outline of a shirt for your format.
do you have any ideas on what i can write??
Nope! I have no more ideas about what YOU can write. Get away from the computer and TV and THINK!
Get a pencil and paper and play around with different ideas and words.
Of course, I can provide you with some ideas for your concrete poem about shopping!
1. Focus on the items: Explore the different objects you might find in a shopping mall or supermarket. Think about their shapes, colors, and textures. For example, you could highlight the roundness of apples, the bright colors of flowers, or the sleekness of electronic devices.
2. Capture the atmosphere: Consider the ambiance and surroundings of a shopping experience. think about the hustle and bustle, the sounds, the smells, and the emotions that people experience while shopping. You could depict the idea of frenetic movement with dynamic lines and shapes, or convey a sense of calmness with more tranquil imagery.
3. Emphasize consumerism: Shopping is often associated with consumerism and materialism. You can explore this theme by incorporating symbols of consumer culture, such as shopping bags, price tags, or shopping carts, into your poem. Consider how these objects relate to your own perspective on shopping.
4. Personalize your experience: Reflect on your own feelings and experiences related to shopping. Do you enjoy it or find it stressful? Focus on the emotions you associate with shopping and try to capture them through words, shapes, and colors. Don't be afraid to express your own opinions and thoughts in your poem.
Remember, a concrete poem is not only about the words but also about the visual representation of the subject. Consider how you can arrange the words and phrases on the page to create a shape that reflects your chosen theme.
Don't be afraid to experiment and have fun with your poem!