Posted by John on Thursday, May 15, 2008 at 5:54pm.
It's all correct with one comma needed and a couple of suggestions:
Comma is needed after "table" in the first sentence.
Think about combining these two sentences to avoid repetition:
I sometimes eat cereal and milk. I enjoy fruit soup for breakfast.
And combine these two also:
I sometimes eat green peppers. I eat green peppers with soybean paste.
Let us know what you come up with, and we'll be happy to give you more feedback.
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