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English Essay Writing MS Sue please check

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Ok this is what I have please let me know what you think thanks so much for your help

Hi Cuz,

I gald that you have move close by to me. The last time we spoke you had mentioned that you were looking for a job.Now I know that you have only worked as a cashier at that department store, however my Boss is looking for an assisant at the front desk of his doctor's office. I know you would be great. He is looking for someone who is very dependable, honest and hard working. The job duties include answering the phones, filing, typing, and interaction with the patients meaning you have to check them in and copy their insurance card. From time to time you may be asked to wheel a patient in to an exam room if the office gets really busy. I can remember the time when we were in high school and Mrs Thomas the schools nurse used talk highly of you and said that you had patince and you were a quick learner. I knopw for sure my Boss and you would get a long great.I know you have a lot of talents and you will do fine. Your parents wanted you to work in a bank I know and they didn't support you at all and you might have low confidence but I know you can do it. Please consider at least checking out the job. You have nothing to lose

  • English Essay Writing MS Sue please check - ,

    This is much better. :-) Note corrections.

    Hi Cuz,

    I glad that you have moved close by to me. The last time we spoke you (omit "had") mentioned that you were looking for a job. Now I know that you have only worked as a cashier at that department store, but my boss is looking for an assisant at the front desk of his doctor's office. I know you would be great. He is looking for someone who is very dependable, honest and hard working. The job duties include answering the phones, filing, typing, and interaction with the patients. This means you'd have to check them in and copy their insurance card. From time to time you may be asked to wheel a patient in to an exam room if the office gets really busy.

    I can remember the time when we were in high school, (<<comma) and Mrs. Thomas, (<<comma) the school's nurse, (<<comma) used talk highly of you and said that you had patience, and you were a quick learner. I know for sure my boss and you would get along great. I know you have a lot of talents and you will do fine. Your parents wanted you to work in a bank I know, (<<comma) and they didn't support you at all. I know you might have low confidence, (<<comma) but I know you can do it. Please consider at least checking out the job. You have nothing to lose.

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    that ws great but try not to make mistakes and you will be a level 10 writter

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