Ok this is what I have please let me know what you think thanks so much for your help

Hi Cuz,

I gald that you have move close by to me. The last time we spoke you had mentioned that you were looking for a job.Now I know that you have only worked as a cashier at that department store, however my Boss is looking for an assisant at the front desk of his doctor's office. I know you would be great. He is looking for someone who is very dependable, honest and hard working. The job duties include answering the phones, filing, typing, and interaction with the patients meaning you have to check them in and copy their insurance card. From time to time you may be asked to wheel a patient in to an exam room if the office gets really busy. I can remember the time when we were in high school and Mrs Thomas the schools nurse used talk highly of you and said that you had patince and you were a quick learner. I knopw for sure my Boss and you would get a long great.I know you have a lot of talents and you will do fine. Your parents wanted you to work in a bank I know and they didn't support you at all and you might have low confidence but I know you can do it. Please consider at least checking out the job. You have nothing to lose

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Hi Cuz,

I glad that you have moved close by to me. The last time we spoke you (omit "had") mentioned that you were looking for a job. Now I know that you have only worked as a cashier at that department store, but my boss is looking for an assisant at the front desk of his doctor's office. I know you would be great. He is looking for someone who is very dependable, honest and hard working. The job duties include answering the phones, filing, typing, and interaction with the patients. This means you'd have to check them in and copy their insurance card. From time to time you may be asked to wheel a patient in to an exam room if the office gets really busy.

I can remember the time when we were in high school, (<<comma) and Mrs. Thomas, (<<comma) the school's nurse, (<<comma) used talk highly of you and said that you had patience, and you were a quick learner. I know for sure my boss and you would get along great. I know you have a lot of talents and you will do fine. Your parents wanted you to work in a bank I know, (<<comma) and they didn't support you at all. I know you might have low confidence, (<<comma) but I know you can do it. Please consider at least checking out the job. You have nothing to lose.

that ws great but try not to make mistakes and you will be a level 10 writter

Hi Cuz,

I'm glad that you've moved close to me. Regarding your job search, I think I might have a great opportunity for you. My boss is looking for an assistant at the front desk of his doctor's office. The job requires someone who is dependable, honest, and hardworking. The duties include answering phone calls, filing, typing, and interacting with the patients, which includes checking them in and making copies of their insurance cards. Occasionally, you may need to assist by wheeling a patient into an exam room if the office gets busy. I remember back in high school when Mrs. Thomas, the school nurse, used to talk highly of you and mentioned that you had patience and were a quick learner. I genuinely believe that you would get along great with my boss. I know your parents wanted you to work in a bank, and they may not have shown much support, which might have affected your confidence. However, I have full confidence in your abilities and think you should at least consider checking out this job opportunity. Remember, you have nothing to lose. Let me know what you think.

Hi there,

It sounds like you have a great opportunity to recommend your cousin for a job as an assistant at the front desk of a doctor's office. It's wonderful that you believe they would be a good fit for the position.

To help your cousin consider the job, you can emphasize the specific skills and qualities that would make them successful in this role. For example, mention their experience as a cashier, which shows they have customer service skills and are comfortable interacting with people. Additionally, highlight their ability to learn quickly and be patient, which Mrs. Thomas, the school nurse, spoke highly of.

When talking about the job duties, be sure to mention that answering phones, filing, typing, and interacting with patients are all part of the role. Explain that there may be times when they need to wheel a patient into an exam room if the office gets busy. This will give them a clear understanding of the tasks they will be responsible for.

It's also important to address any concerns they might have, such as their parents wanting them to work in a bank and not being supportive. Let them know that you believe in their abilities and that they have nothing to lose by at least checking out the job opportunity. Encourage them to have confidence in their talents and remind them that you think they can do well in this role.

Overall, your message is supportive and encouraging. By highlighting your cousin's strengths, explaining the job duties, and addressing their concerns, you are providing them with the necessary information to consider the job offer. It's a thoughtful gesture to recommend the opportunity to your cousin and offer your support.

I hope this explanation helps you understand how you can present your thoughts to your cousin. Let me know if you have any more questions!