posted by Zoe on .
Change your thinking(Title of my reseach paper)
How do I plan to support my thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments. My thesis statement is," Even though we experince situation that demonstrate this simple principle- the way we think determines the we feel".
Your thesis statement doesn't make much sense to me.
You might want to simplify it to "The way we think determines the way we feel." However, I think it may be difficult to find research to support this statement.
Thanks! I will revise it
If you haven't already included it, you might want to use the work of Albert Ellis and his ABC theory.
I hope this helps a little more. Thanks for asking.