English- please revise
posted by rose- Ms. Sue on .
Create a thesis statement for your research paper:
My topic is: The price of food is leading the uprise of inflation in today's economy.
My thesis statement:
The rising price of commodities around the world caused a lack of production which is resulting in starvation in developing countries.
How do you plan to support your thesis with compelling arguments and counterarguments?
My topic will be supported by extensive research results from organizations such as the United Nations and the world economic consult who revealed startling statistic that support my compelling argument.
I suggest you change "uprise" to "rise."
Your thesis statement doesn't support your topic. Your topic states that the price of food is one of the main causes of inflation. Your topic says nothing about starvation.
Have you actually found research results from the U.N. and other world economic organizations?
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