Posted by Suzi Q on Thursday, April 24, 2008 at 11:11am.
You need to add "...are maximized, and their...."
Or you could revise it one of these ways:
When these policies and guidelines are strictly observed, the shortcomings of Tasers are all but eliminated.
When these policies and guidelines are strictly observed, the shortcomings of Tasers are minimized.
I hope this helps. Thanks for asking.
I think it's:
When these policies and guidelines are strictly observed, the advantages of Tasers maximized and their shortcomings nearly eliminated.
Am I correct?
Put "are" before maximized....
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