Please revise this sentance:

That we the Australian people are becoming to excessively like the United States of America

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Minerva

The Australian people are becoming too much like people in the United States of America.

Ok. What about this...

The Australian people are undergoing a change making the Australian people excessivly like the United States of America.

So what I put down is right? Should it be:

The Australian people are undergoing a change making the Australian people excessivly like the people of the United States of America.

Revised sentence: The Australian people are increasingly becoming excessively similar to the United States of America.

Explanation:
To revise the sentence, we can follow these steps:

1. Identify the subject and the main idea: The main idea of the sentence is that the Australian people are becoming similar to the United States of America excessively.

2. Remove unnecessary words: In this case, the word "that" is not needed and can be eliminated.

3. Rearrange the sentence structure: Rephrase the sentence so it reads more smoothly and clearly.

4. Use appropriate grammar and punctuation: Make sure the revised sentence follows proper grammar rules.

By applying these steps, we can create a more concise and grammatically correct sentence that conveys the intended meaning.