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February 27, 2015

February 27, 2015

Posted by **John** on Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 5:07pm.

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Would you check the passage? It is an activity.

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**Writeacher**, Thursday, April 17, 2008 at 6:00pmCapital T at the beginning of the 7th sentence.

Instead of "according to my command," it'd be better to say "according to my directions."

Instead of "according as you are told," it should read "just as you are told."

In this sentence -- "On the right side of the house there are two trees." -- I think "houses" would be more accurate since you told her to draw two of them.

Otherwise, well done!

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