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Homework Help: English/ please revise

Posted by Christi on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 at 9:20pm.

this is my intro for a paper I am writing about ethic con!@#$%^& and nationalism. can you please revise and tell me if it sounds ok. thanx.

Pakistan is not a single nation state, but a multi-national state composed of five major ethnic groups. Most of the people in Pakistan belong in to one of the country’s five major ethno linguistic groups, Punjabis, Sindhis, Pashtuns, Mohajirs and Baluch. Pakistan is governed as an ethnic-nation with a dictatorial political structure that has denied the subordinate nations the right to share political power. In recent years, subordinate nations are gaining more force and are becoming more organized and unified against the domination of the Pakistani chauvinistic regimes, growing into armed resistance, especially the Baluchistan (Boladai 2007).

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