Posted by Bizzy on Monday, April 14, 2008 at 4:59pm.
According to Garmezy, a researcher of resilient individuals explains resiliency by the presence of “protective factors,” those qualities or situations that help alter or reverse expected negative outcomes.
Delete "According to" and put a comma after "individuals" -- then this sentence will make sense.
The second sentence would read better this way.
Garmezy, a researcher of resilient individuals, defines resiliency as the presence of "protective factors", those qualties or situations that help alter or reverse expected negative outcomes.
Thank you!
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