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Homework Help: Proofreading

Posted by Bizzy on Wednesday, April 9, 2008 at 9:55pm.


This is my introduction paragraph for an essay I am writing. I am not really confident on my grammar and sentence stucture. I want to make sure the introduction sounds smooth and formal. I would like to have someone's feedback on it. Thanks!

The topic of my paper is promoting resilience in children. Building resilience in a child is important because people genuinely experience difficulties during their life span. It is important for children to know how to overcome tough times, lonely times, frustrating times, and unfair times. For these reasons I decided to make my web article evaluation paper based on this topic because it is vital for parents to help build their child’s backbone in order for them to bounce back through hardships.

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